Nothing To Do With Anything

[NeverMind]

Hey guys and gals. I've spent like a total of 11 hours in the last two days working on a story. It's only like 13 pages long and it's not done but I'd like you guys to check it out.
The link is here (http://doomohnevermind.bravehost.com/novel.html)
but the web host messed up the paragraphs and indentations, so if you want the version from Word, just email at badpizza13@hotmail.com
Thanks!

[zygoat]

Nevermind,
not that you really want to hear it from me,but your story was good!!I hope you have many more adventures like that!! B)

[NeverMind]

Thank you, zygoat. I enjoy hearing feedback, positive or negative. And it's not MY story. It's not about me. I wish I had adventures like that.

[sonrisa]

Originally posted by NeverMind@Jul 27 2004, 09:45 PM
It's not about me. I wish I had adventures like that.

why? do u wanna be a boy toy?

ps in the Real World, the cops catch up with u eventually

B)

[NeverMind]

why? do u wanna be a boy toy?
yeah. that would be fun. plus, the story isnt finished. You'll see.

ps in the Real World, the cops catch up with u eventually
oh not always. they never got the dude in Swordfish! eh? eh? or Gone in 60 Seconds! eh? eh?
I'm kidding. But Christie and Matt are stickin' it to the man. They might get caught later in the story. You never know.

[sonrisa]

sonrisa--why? do u wanna be a boy toy?

nm--yeah. that would be fun.

-- :shakehead:


sonrisa (previously)--ps in the Real World, the cops catch up with u eventually

nm-- oh not always. they never got the dude in Swordfish! eh? eh? or Gone in 60 Seconds! eh? eh?
I'm kidding.

--the operative word is eventually. Sometimes it takes years, decades, even, like that dude that was living in N Korea & has to have surgery in Japan- the Govt finally got their hands on him.

nm--But Christie and Matt are sticking it to the man. They might get caught later in the story.

--they are? I thought they were having themselves a good ol roll in the hay. But I'll wait for u to finish the story. Actually I thought it was finished when Matt realizes he has no way of contacting Christie again & that she was just playing with him after all. That he had one unusual day in his otherwise mundane existence. What you wrote so far could stand on its own as a short story.

Doesn't Bill Gates live in Belleview? Do they really have elevators with mirrors in the mansions there?

[NeverMind]

Yeah Bill Gates lives in Bellview. They probly have mirrored elevators. It'd make sense to me. Bill Gates has the hugest house. I'm not even gonna get into how freaking awesome it is.

Yeah it could be a short story as it is, but I've written another chapter and a half but i dont think i've posted it. It keeps getting crappier, to be perfectly honest, cuz I've gotten bored.

--the operative word is eventually
What about the Nazis living in South America? The ones the CIA let go cuz they gave us info. on the Soviets? Yeah. When are the cops gonna catch up to them?
Christie's too rich to care about the cops anyway.